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Journey to My Writing Niche

            When I first began writing, I hadn’t a clue on what I should be doing or what I wanted to write.  I only knew I loved the craft and believed I had the potential to be good at it, but my beginning efforts were all over the place.  I didn’t know if I wanted to write essays, short stories, or novels.  I hadn’t even nailed down a preferred genre.  I just knew I wanted to write and be published.  But where to begin?

            I started with short stories.  They were compact enough to keep me interested and the length allowed for repeated editing in a reasonable time frame.  From there I expanded into novellas, though at the time I had no idea that was what I was writing.  I found and joined a writers’ critique group who not only helped me hone my skills, but also introduced me to the many styles, techniques, and genres of successful writers.  I also started attending writing conferences and author talks.  After a time I felt confident enough to attempt a full-length novel, though I still did not know what genre I preferred.

            My first novel turned out to be dystopian, though at the time, I simply labeled it as science fiction.  That was eight years ago, pretty much before anyone had heard of the dystopian genre.  I finished the story in ten months, sent it to one agent and one contest, got rejected by both, and threw it in a draw where it still sits to this day.  Had I known then what I know now and took the time to rewrite and polish it, I might be riding high on the crest of the current wave of dystopian novels hitting the market.  Hind sight is truly 20/20.  But it was my practice novel.  Most writers have one and if you’re afraid to start one, don’t be.  It was my best learning experience.  Editing it would probably have been more work than totally rewriting it, but it was my starting point.  I had written and finished a novel, and I was sure I could do it again, but with more skill.  I was on the path to being published.        

            My next novel was an Arthurian Legend.  Talk about an ambitious biting-off-more-than-you-can-chew project.  Inspired by The Mists of Avalon and the countless other versions of the King Arthur tale, I wrote a whopping 466,000 word manuscript in alternating points of view between Arthur and his sister Morganna.  It took me approximately three years, seventy-six agent rejections, and hundreds of late nights, early mornings, and summer vacation days to realize the genre had had its day in the eighties and was no longer in demand.  Though well written, it wasn’t what people wanted to read.  It too sits in a draw, right next to my dystopian novel.

            Finally, my next attempt was a young adult paranormal fantasy.  I had always been interested in ghosts, alternate realities, UFO’s, cryptozoology, parallel dimensions, and the like.  And being a reading teacher, I knew what kids liked to read and, more importantly, what they did not.  I saw which books were popular, I took what I was interested in, and voila–Island of Tory, my first published novel, was born eleven months later.

            The journey to finding my writing niche was by no means a straight path, but each detour brought me closer to my ultimate goal of being published.  No one has a crystal ball to see what will be the next genre trend, so my advice is write what you like, do it well, and create your own trend.  A good book is a good book, and readers will recognize it when they see it.  And don’t be discouraged when you get a rejection.  A rejection is an opinion of one person at one point in time.  Many great novels and novelists have been rejected by people who now wish they had said “yes” instead.  And if at first you don’t succeed–yeah, you know the cliché–but it’s sound advice that every aspiring writer should remember and live by.  It’s been my writing mantra for years.  It’s helped me reach my goals even when they’ve seemed incredibly impossible.

Collaging: Finding Your Writing Muse

            I’m often asked where I get my ideas for writing. I wish I could say, “Off the top of my head,” but that’s not true at all. I’ll admit that I am creative, but I need a little inspiration to get the artistic juices flowing. Being a very visual person, I find my muse in pictures.

            I never considered my brainstorming methods to be collaging, until I looked to see what other writers did to come up with their story ideas. When I saw that many of them used a collection of pictures, maps, scraps of fabric, and key words or phrases gathered together in a visually appealing arrangement called collage, I suddenly realized I had been unwittingly using the same writing technique.

            There is no right or wrong way to collage. Talk to ten different writers who use collage to inspire their writing, and you will get ten variations on the “correct” method. But there are some basic components all effective collages have in common. So…here is the Geither recipe for a successful writing collage:

Canvas

            First, you need a base upon which to glue your collection of images. Poster board, tri-fold display boards, cork boards, shoeboxes, manila folders, or even spiral notebooks will work. There is no right or wrong choice. You need to decide which base works best for you.

            I prefer a tri-fold display board due to the fact that it is large, freestanding, and can be folded up and tucked under the bed when not in use. I have, however, also taken the manila folder route on occasion.

Images

            Next, start collecting images. Use magazines, greeting cards, photos, old maps, clipart, or images from the internet. Gather images of people, places, and things. Try to find a variety of pictures that represent setting, characters, and mood.

            When writing my novel, Island of Tory, I visited every Tory Island website I could find. I printed copies of maps, pictures of the points of interest, and photos of local people and animals. These images gave me a good visual feel for the island and its inhabitants.  I also printed pictures of Celtic art and symbols.  This helped me develop the mysterious and foreboding mood felt throughout the book. 

Arrange

            Finally, organize your images into categories–characters, setting, and plot. This is where a tri-fold display board comes in handy, because each section can be used to display pictures relating to one of the particular categories.

            Personally, I like to keep each category separate, but some writers like to mix it up. Again, the choice is yours. Just remember, whether you fasten your images with pushpins, staples, tape, or glue, your collage is not set in stone. Change it when you need to. Add, subtract, or start over as the need arises. Remember that your collage is a tool, not a ball and chain.

Utilize

            Look at your collage before, during, and after you write. Jot notes on it. Add comments and captions. Utilize your collage as a springboard, but never feel tied to it. The purpose of a collage is to stimulate and inspire creativity and help you focus on your story.

            Though I begin every writing project with a complete collage, the collage is rarely finished before my story is done. I constantly add new pictures and words as my story develops. I was still adding pictures to my Island of Tory collage even after I signed the publishing contract. And I even sent portions of the collage to my publisher to hand on to the illustrator, so I could make sure he had a good feel for the mood of my novel.

Muse It!

            With practice, collaging can help you develop, organize, and complete any writing project. Whether it’s a short story, essay, poem, or novel, a well developed collage can be just the muse you are looking for.

Collage used for CURSING STONE

Planner or Pantser? That is the Question

            So you have an idea for a novel, but you’re just not sure how to proceed.  Should you start with an outline plotting out the entire book or just start writing, making it up as you go along?  If you take a survey of writers, novice and expert alike, you will get a plethora of answers on how to successfully start and finish a book.  The correct way, however, will depend upon the type of writer you are and your personal preferences.

            If your personality dictates that you must know precisely where you are going and how you will get there, you are a planner by nature and will tend to lean toward outlining your book before you attempt your first paragraph.  Outlines are like roadmaps.  They can be as detailed or as sketchy as needed.  If you are a AAA trip-tick or Mapquest enthusiast, this is probably your preferred method of writing madness and you are most likely a planner.

            Some planners like to write chapter outlines where they list the main events of each chapter under the chapter title.  This gives them a good overview of their story’s sequence and allows them to get from point A to point B in a nice orderly succession.  Other planners like to put down the “skeleton” of their story first and then fill it in with the “meat” or details, taking a general to specific approach.  Still others work backward, knowing the ending before they begin.  They start at the conclusion and backtrack, detailing the events that lead up to the grand finale.

            Many agents and publishers require an outline of a novel before they will look at anything else.  And though the outline might be an excruciating chore, it does make writing the novel much easier.  Some writers, however, feel that once the outline is written, they are married to it.  Unless the outline is chiseled in stone, you can change it and your story however you see fit.  There is no outline commandment that says, “Thou shall not change your mind once thou typest The End.”

            But there is something to be said for those writers who fly by the seats of their pants and do it with finesse.  These are known as pantsers.  These masters of the imagination can spin a yarn as easily as your grandmother crochets an afghan–intricate, flawless, and off the cuff.  Even when they write themselves into a corner, they find a trapdoor and escape.  These writers enjoy the freedom and excitement of the unknown.  And though they may not know where they are going or how they are going to get there, they enjoy the ride.

            But do not fear if neither approach appeals to you, for there is any number of degrees between the two extremes that are productive.  Scores of writers practice varying combinations of the two methods with great success.  My personal preference is to have a basic beginning, middle, and end in mind, while letting my writing take me where it will.

            When planning out a novel, I am not one to take the time to fill-in a sheet full of Roman numerals and letters, but I do have a vague mental roadmap in mind before I begin to type.  I like to start with my protagonist, making him or her a reluctant hero with genuine flaws.  The plot of my story revolves around this character’s problem and how it is resolved. 

            Second, I add conflict.  Someone or something has to stand between the protagonist and his or her goal.  Without a villain or obstacle, there is no story.  The conflict can be man verses man, man verses nature, or man verses self.  Regardless of the type of conflict, there needs to be drama.  Without drama, a plot dies.  No one likes a story where everyone is content and happy from beginning to end.  But tell a story about someone facing a crisis, and you’ve got an audience.

            Third, I create my setting.  Though I am a fantasy writer, I do not design my story locations from scratch.  I like to research real places and time periods that fit my needs, and tweak them to fit my stories’ purposes.  For example, in my young adult fantasy novel, Island of Tory, I needed to set my story in a remote and mysterious place to suit the requirements of my plot.  I researched various Irish islands to find a real location that would lend itself to my story’s purpose and mood.  When I read about Tory’s history and legends, I knew I had the makings of the perfect setting for my book.

            Once I have the protagonist, conflict, and setting of my novel nailed down, I improvise and adlib the rest, adding characters and events like pavers in a road to the finish.  So if I had to define myself as one or the other, planner or pantser, I guess I’m a Mudblood.  My flavor of writing is a fusion of the two in varying degrees, depending on the story at hand.  And if a random survey of writers was taken, I doubt that most would fit neatly into one of the two categories. 

            So, planner or pantser?  That is the question.  I say…yes.

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